Letter of Resignation

[_ebin_]

Halifax Nova Scotia

B3L 1A8

Rosita Kwong,

I am writing this letter to explain why I am leaving King Wah. I think that in the interest of improving your business, you have the right to know why your employees choose to quit.

There are two problems I am

Comments

[_ebin_]

Draft # 2.

Thoughts? Too forceful? Too obvious? (read: you're a fecken bitch) Just right? she is pretty brutal, if youve read it, and something stands out as too rude, or badly written, please pipe up and say something.

[_stuman_]

Looks pretty good, I found the second paragraph to be a little more aggressive then the first.

Sounds like that place really bites though.

[4thsurvivor]

I like it. You sort of chicken out at the end though. People remember conclusions, so go out with a bang.

[bradbeattie]

Way to stick it to the man!