In the Light of day...

[_ebin_]

King Wah Restarant

Comments

[netter_maimai]

positive language always gets you farther. this version is great - your language is not accusatory and you come across as professional and kind with criticism. at the same time, you make valid points about areas to improve. good stuff.

[highcommander]

You're a much bigger man than I Blair. I would've placed shit wrapped in newspaper in the deepfrier and be done with it.