I hope that is the title.. i didnt double check!hole_in_my_lipJune 11 2005, 05:56:09 UTC
I tried to post this in the a_poetry_club page as a comment but they have not made me a member yet (i just applied) so hopefully you will get this post here! It is in reference to you poem: THE OH IN RIVER Is this a count down? i noticed 2 countdowns of 4,3,2,1 "...{for[4]} me and you and me and you. {three hundred and twenty one[3][2][1]}..."
"...{for[4]} by faster and i can only find {three[3]} {to[2]} make it slow down. (n{one[1]}..."
just noticed... maybe i'm stretching it.. i like number patterns as you see. I liked it.. chaotic like water but always somehow connected. I also like the letter reversal- the oh in river an eye in ocean
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It is in reference to you poem: THE OH IN RIVER
Is this a count down? i noticed 2 countdowns of 4,3,2,1
"...{for[4]} me and you
and me
and you.
{three hundred and twenty
one[3][2][1]}..."
"...{for[4]} by
faster
and i can only find {three[3]}
{to[2]} make it slow down.
(n{one[1]}..."
just noticed... maybe i'm stretching it.. i like number patterns as you see.
I liked it.. chaotic like water but always somehow connected.
I also like the letter reversal-
the oh in river
an eye in ocean
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