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[_fallen_sakura]

Time for a serious entry. :D

Damn, I go to my DA page (http://salvationkills666.deviantart.com/) and find some old poems. My life has CHANGED. ALOT. 99% of those poems don't even apply anymore. I'm glad though. And I'm about get kicked offline, so I'll continue this later.

Comments

[onetwo934oh]

i read one and it sounds good.
one thing i can never get my poems to do is to flow.
i have really good imagery/metaphors/whatever, but i can't make it flow! it's frustrating.
but yeah, i thought yours was good in that way

[_fallen_sakura]

Which one did you read?

And if you ever want help with some poetry, just ask. :)

[onetwo934oh]

i read 'can you hear me scream'

[_fallen_sakura]

Ah, okay. That's one of my better ones.. I guess, lol.