i'm with kelly on the distant relation thing. *shivers* what an ending that would be!
i started to feel a bit nostalgic for the happy-go-lucky toby/josie days, when you mentioned the last time they were happy. but nonetheless, the jack/josie fluff made me happy for a bit, so it all balances out!
Okay, I hope this doesn't come out sounding condescending, because it's really not meant to sound that way at all...
The whole point of having it mentioned that Josie and Zoe are very similar in appearance is meant to explain Toby's initial reaction to Josie the first time they met and his overzealous interest in her thereafter. Of course, 99% of the feelings developed for Josie afterwards are because of who she is, but there is still part of Toby who is reminded of the special bond he had with his grandmother as a child.
Hope that makes sense and clears up any kind of incest-y thoughts this update may have caused.
oh, i thought about that as well... after i made my initial post, though. i figured you weren't sick enough to make this all some sort of distant cousin on distant cousin story. haha.
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although I will say I was terribly amused with the image of jackson bouncing around on the bed chewing gum. Very nice ;).
Also though... getting a bad vibe about the looking like the grandma... hoping there's not some distant relation cause that would be weird.
Anyway, welcome back! I've missed the story!
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i started to feel a bit nostalgic for the happy-go-lucky toby/josie days, when you mentioned the last time they were happy. but nonetheless, the jack/josie fluff made me happy for a bit, so it all balances out!
i'm glad you started writing this again.
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The whole point of having it mentioned that Josie and Zoe are very similar in appearance is meant to explain Toby's initial reaction to Josie the first time they met and his overzealous interest in her thereafter. Of course, 99% of the feelings developed for Josie afterwards are because of who she is, but there is still part of Toby who is reminded of the special bond he had with his grandmother as a child.
Hope that makes sense and clears up any kind of incest-y thoughts this update may have caused.
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