Comments | _flawed_mind: My 2nd!! *hopes it's ok*

_flawed_mind

My 2nd!! hopes it's ok

Jan 24, 2005 07:17

Title: I Told You (standalone)
Author: Me, Elizabeth twisted_inkPairing: Jepha(The Used)/Madden Twins ( Read more... )

Comments 16

lafuckinlala January 25 2005, 06:47:02 UTC

I agree with drawing board. I was good, but even if you don't get a Beta, just read through it a little better. Well, get a friend too, because it's always going to be right in your eyes, just because it's your head and you KNOW what you're trying to say.

_flawed_mind January 25 2005, 08:04:43 UTC

I know, as soon as I put it up I had to get off cause I was sleepy. I was to tired to wait for a beta or find one. I should have, but writing it's a big deal to me.
Thanks. <3

tearsofliza January 26 2005, 19:12:37 UTC

LIX! Next time, you HAVE to tell me when you write one. If I'm not on IM, e-mail me. (You better write more, or I'll have to hurt you...somehow...)

*dies* Yeah, like other people said there were some spelling and grammar errors and stuff...but, you know. I thought it was really good (and I'm not just saying that because we're friends either).