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[_glamourette]

SENSE OF MOVEMENTShe crept to the edge of the stage, attention fixed on the carousel of satin shoes. The cello’s melody turned in slow circles, and the dancers breathed life into the notes, their hands striking still chords in the air, their feet whispering rhythm against the black wood. The song was fall and each ballerina a leaf, lithe bodies

Comments

[aintitfunny967]

I remember that assignment. I'm listening to Beethoven right now and it goes with the sense of movement beautifully.

[_glamourette]

Thank you. I really half assed the sound one. I just wanted to write about a boy and a girl. The movement one is the one I'm going to turn in. I'm glad you liked it!

[black_comedy]

you get to pick one? we had to write five, I think, and then she randomly chose which one she was going to grade. different.

[aintitfunny967]

yeah, we did have to write all five. I sucked major ass.

[kaz00]

hello

[_glamourette]

hi YOU.

[iamastrophobia]

Oh Keito san, you really do have a way with words. I love them both, I know it sounds dorky, but they totally transported me to a far off place. Great piece. Post it on deviantart, k? Then send me a link. :D

ah duh duh

[joyocola]

I think I feel dumber and dumber when i read your journal thingy,

[vampiress]

You know who I am. Add me back please?