poem

[_greenme_]

this is one of the best poems i have read so far. tell me what you think about this person's poem

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[_virtuallove_]

Oh my goodness!! becky, i love that poem- haha you have a good eye out for great poems--

It actually reminds me ALOT of us.
"I see for now our time is done.
Clouds now cover a friendly sun.
You never write or call to see
about how feelings fare in me."

annnd

"You said that we would always be
the best of friends both you and me"

and

"So, take your friends on A.O.L.
They've been with you for quite a spell.
You say they are the one's that's true.
They'll never know the inner you."

annddd

"You confide in me so little now.
To me I seem to wonder how
you ever took away your heart
that seemed to tear my heart apart."

i love it!!!!! ayyaya

i hope we can get close again!!!!! :(

<3<3<3KELSIE.

kelsie

[_greenme_]

yea when i read it i thought of me and you too. wow buddy.. we thought the same there. haha yea i love this poem to death! one of the best ones i have found so far.

[livin_4tomorrow]

becky. i seriously loveee that poem. it makes me think a lot. thinking isn't good ha.. but i really like it!!! where do u find these!?

and sometime it doesn't have to be right now or the next weekend. haha. but we do need to get together... with some other ppl to! cause i love ya pancake buddy :D..
thanks for all the help and talks i love it!
and sorry that i dont talk much...
i still love ya even if it doesn't seem like it.

love always,
frances.

frances

[_greenme_]

haha yes pancake/ singing buddy!! we have to get together.. hum.. lets try next weekend!! ahah okay. scoreness!!

yea i love this poem.. i got them from.. poetry.com

i love you!!!!!