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Bend and Not Break: Studio 60

Dec 23, 2006 11:41

Title: Bend and Not Break
Author: blueeyelinerx
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1474
Pairing/Character: Jordan, with hints of Danny/Jordan
Summary: Jordan has always been beautiful but she has never been graceful and it is fitting that the first time she admits she is pregnant out loud, she is a tangle of feverish limbs and hazy thoughts on Danny’s hard office floor ( Read more... )

studio 60, danny/jordan

Comments 12

hopeful_writer December 23 2006, 17:07:41 UTC

Aw, that was great. Loved the plausible middle stuff that we didn't get to see in the show, and Jordan's feelings throughout it were spot on.

bbennett December 23 2006, 19:05:00 UTC

Very nicely written - you have a great style. Write more. :)

samantha2074 December 23 2006, 20:11:56 UTC

I really love your take on Jordan. I also like that your ending is optimistic but the story isn't overly sentimental. Excellent job!

thekatebeyond December 23 2006, 20:27:12 UTC

Wonderful! There's a very realistic tone to this piece. It would be frightening to be in Jordan's shoes, but she'd work hard not to show it.

I really enjoyed this!

empressvesica December 23 2006, 21:24:22 UTC

That was just lovely. You did a wonderful job of capturing all the confusion and mixed emotion from Jordan at the start and Danny's ridiculously endearing concern.