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mistakes we knew we were making: heroes/fnl

Jul 09, 2007 22:54

Title: mistakes we knew we were making
Rating: PG
Fandoms: Heroes, Friday Night Lights
Characters: Claire Bennet, Tim Riggins
Word Count: 287
Prompt: Rain (Week Five at

Spoilers: all of Season 1 for both
Summary: It takes Claire all of ten minutes to realize that Dillon, Texas is the exact same as Odessa, Texas.

It takes Claire all of ten minutes to ( Read more... )

crossover, tim/claire, choco_cherries, heroes, fnl

Comments 4

hide_r July 10 2007, 05:26:14 UTC

So let me just say first that I am totally ecstatic that you entered a challenge. (And thanks for pimping!)

And this was beyond great. When I saw the pairing I kinda went 'huh' but clicked anyway. But wow, I loved it. I could totally see Claire in Dillion and the way she perceived everything about the place was spot on, I really felt like those are the comparison and comments she'd be making in her head.

Also, I love the situation (the fact that she drew his name, hee) and the banter between them two. It was really great and I only wish this challenge had a bigger word limit so it'd be longer. It ended way to quickly. I only hope you consider writing them again ♥

define_serenity July 10 2007, 10:16:25 UTC

Oh this is great! Loved it!

sophiap July 10 2007, 10:28:11 UTC

This was adorable. Claire's voice was pitch-perfect.

bobtheduck15 July 11 2007, 05:53:26 UTC

The way you portrayed Claire was spot on, imo. Seems like something she would do - especially after the way S1 ended. Really like the ficlet too, something about it really appeals to me. Keep this up, mkay. :P