i love it a lot a lot but give me more description...tell me what hte neighbour looks like, the texture of the soil on the ground, how cold it is, does the wind have a taste, what the squirrel shit on its right branch smells like, are there any people that come by and eat its babies... i'm so excited by this story it's not funny
see, i thought of doing descriptions like that, but a tree doesnt have eyes, or a sense of smell...but then i got to thinking, how are they talking? telepathically? i didnt want it to seem like it had eyes when i was writing it, which is why i wrote that it could feel the energy receeding, as a way of saying the sun was setting.
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but give me more description...tell me what hte neighbour looks like, the texture of the soil on the ground, how cold it is, does the wind have a taste, what the squirrel shit on its right branch smells like, are there any people that come by and eat its babies...
i'm so excited by this story it's not funny
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