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[_jack_]

I've awoken mere moments ago, though I'm not completely sure that I had been asleep. I feel, quite literally, as if my throat's been cut--a bottomless bit of some unfathomed ache churns within me. I should have somehow brought food with me; I should have saved a little scrap, or somethingThe earth is spinning at some fast pace that is far too

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[_trudy_]

[OOC: Gotta ask - Jack has always been a science geek - would he be this literative? Inquisitive, a bit shy/bumbly, but he's never been much of a poet. ;)]

[_trudy_]

[Characters tend to speak in the same manner that they think, with rare exception. When one looks at the world with a literal mind, that is one communicates, and when one looks at the world with an artistic mind, that's how one communicates. Lex, for example, is a very 'basic needs' type - he doesn't think much beyond his situation and given stimuli, but it fits his character. Trudy tend fret and worry and insert herself, she talks much like she thinks, as does Amber. Tai-San is a spiritual person, her thoughts and words are often similar. Duality between the two is extremely rare, like in an idiot savant situation - think Good Will Hunting type.]

[_jack_]

[OOC: Well, in literature, they say that authors, at least when they start out, write about what they know. I'm one of those odd people that doesn't write the way they think (I run around saying saying things like, "That's freakin AWESOME!" but I don't write that when in the creative process, whether it be a story or analytic piece. I write something like, "The simple grandeur of the moment pleased me."). I honestly didn't know that not eveyrone is like that. o_O

I wasn't going to make him talk like that while in interaction with the other characters. While I have to rely on WAM! for Tribe episodes, I do know that he kind of stumbles around, a bit awkward with communication.

*shrugs*

If you like I can tone it down, but I figured, it's just his little journal....I mean, doesn't everyone have a poet inide?]