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[_kate_b]

A poem written by my pal Renee.

Sitting down and thinking,
Why life is never fair,
Hoping as the're twinkling,
The stars up in the air.
But the only things you lack,
are what you desire most,
and how can you get back,
that which you never owned.
The sad truth is that never,
but only if we try,
cand we obtain the glory,
that we see within our eye.

Comments

[vivid__beauty]

I like it. I think it's interesting. Gilly doesn't think it's that great though. :(

[beautiful__fool]

KAT: I wanna thank you for taking my words out of context and putting a twist on them...Not to mention mis-quoting me! Love ya, sis!

KATELIN: I'd like to say your friend's poem is very intriguing, different, unique and abstract! But, I simply don't understand how certain lines relate to others...Or what it's supposed to mean! Now, I don't want you to think I'm insulting either of you...But, as someone who writes her own poetry, I'd really like to get a better understanding of this fascinating poem! *smiles*

[_kate_b]

Oh, so you do like it? Well, whether you do or don't... I don't care. See, it was written in about, 5 minutes. But, whatever. You really think it's fascinating? *raises brow*

[beautiful__fool]

I more than like it...I love it! Honestly and truly, I do! *nods head* I just found myself somewhat confused by the poem's meaning...*shrugs*...And you know how I am w/poetry! *laughs* Nevertheless, I am fascinated by it and find it very intriguing! *smiles*

[c_z_jones]

Hey, hey, hey! -smiles- How's my best "girlfriend"? -winks-

I've gotta hand it to Renee, she's really outdone herself this time! -nods- But then again, we always knew she was the gifted one in the family! Afterall, she is very talented! Oh, and of course I love the poem! -smiles- Gotta run! -hugs&kisses-

[_kate_b]

Hey, hey, hey...I'm doin' alright! *laughs*

She's the gifted one??? Hey, Cally, what about me? I mean, I know Renee's talented, but please...I got some abitities too! *playfully rolls eyes*

[c_z_jones]

I know you're both talented, but, Renee just has that extra special ability -- don't ya think? -smiles playfully- Although, it must run in the family b/c that's what the two of you have in common! -winks-