Comments | _kibbs: The Red BMW in the Parking Lot, Part Two.

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The Red BMW in the Parking Lot, Part Two.

Oct 16, 2009 22:15

Title: The Red BMW in the Parking Lot, Part Two
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citymusings October 17 2009, 02:54:48 UTC

lol. Awweeeesome.

You know, now that you've started this "series" you should write more! (That's my opinion at least)

happy_overdose October 17 2009, 23:03:32 UTC

Thank you!

And I will be. There is a demand.

citymusings October 17 2009, 23:12:24 UTC

Sweeeet! Katie may need a birthday before this series is over. ;-p

dani101 October 17 2009, 06:49:40 UTC

OMG...that was sooooo amazing!!!!!!Just made my day!:)

PS: Agree with citymusings about the series.:)*offers a cookie,chocolate and whatever your soul desire*(yes,I try to bribe you:D)

happy_overdose October 17 2009, 22:59:29 UTC

*Takes bribes* Thanks!!!

Thank you for the nice review :)

sasha_perrette October 17 2009, 07:57:24 UTC

I love it :)

And I simply have to agree with citymusings and dani. This is too good to stop now.

happy_overdose October 17 2009, 22:58:39 UTC

I'll be continuing, since there is a great demand. Thank you for reading!

cyad October 17 2009, 08:33:38 UTC

OMG: I love it! Thank you soo much for taking the time to write this. It's purely amazing!

she smiled, following the progress of his finger as it went to trace a pattern on her exposed shoulder. He smiled in that cute way he had.

"You free tomorrow night?" he asked.

She frowned a little, "What?"

"I said, are you free tomorrow night. I’ll pick you up and take you to dinner."

"Really?"

"Really."

"Okay," she gushed, grinning and not believing her luck.

Then she realised his lips were just a whisper away from hers...

She leaned in, looking into his baby blue eyes, heart racing...

You know, When I read that part I thought: "wait a second, right there in a class? Sounds very off... what's she up too...?" and then, when I heard the crash and everything: that was just perfect timing!

Gotta agree with my fellow Kibbs shippers, here. You can't stop this serie here... I guess that means I'll keep on nagging for sequels of sequels... does such a thing even exist?

happy_overdose October 17 2009, 22:57:46 UTC

Okay, okay, Ive officially bent to the pressure. I'm gonna write more.

And thank you. I did it for you :)

Kissing your teacher in class is too wrong. Unless you're asleep of course ;)

cyad October 19 2009, 12:20:50 UTC

YAY!!!! **squees like mad**

And I'm really touched you did. I even printed it out so I could re-re-re-...-read anytime I feel like it or... while waiting for mext chapters ('cause, we can officially talk about chapters, now). ;)

Soo wrong but dreaming's always allowed. Rushes to read more.

jeanniefan78 October 18 2009, 01:50:11 UTC

Wow, this was fabulous--both parts. Can't wait to read more. :)