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The Roomba Story

If you have any advice on how I can revise this for my fiction workshop final, it would be welcomed.

Comments

[imonlyapuppet]

I have so much reading to do before finals and I've spent the last ten minutes reading a fantastic quirky story about vacuuming robots.. I'm going to fail out of college.

You suck, Jill. (<= vacuum pun)

[_kissme_killme_]

:) I'm glad you liked it. And I loved the pun.

[erinb0t]

very funny jill. i hope that this does not happen to us.

[imvileandcheap]

Sorry for posting on your journal, but I am no longer a member of the community and I wanted to reply to your comment. Thank you for the criticism. I am serious about writing, as I will be majoring in Mass Comm in the fall for journalistic writing. I'll admit that creative writing is not my forte. If it had been an option I would've used one of my editorials that I have written for the newspaper. I prefer controversial issues. I haven't seen that movie, but I think I'll have to now.