Universe of you

[_love4one_]

You came to me in different shades of colors

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wow

[ria85]

that was amazing... I was reading and hoping you wouldnt close this one. I love that you left it open at the end. :o)
Kudos!

Re: wow

[_love4one_]

It's funny that you say that, because today at work. I was thinking of an ending for this poem.

It was gonna go something like......"But watch from afar with the telescope of my heart
Seeing our stars slowly drift apart
You then wonder what's wrong with you
and play the role of the victim
that you have mastered
You are in your universe of you
And all it has brought you is solitude
Hope you enjoy it

what do you think?

Or should I leave it as is?

I see your on LJ a lot more now

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[ria85]

:oP Leave it alone!