Comments | _lyricsnletters: one two three

mbsch in _lyricsnletters

Apr 29, 2005 00:44

don't forget I'm here to stay ( Read more... )

Comments 3

tiredbuthyper April 29 2005, 21:53:27 UTC

I like it.

The first stanza, especially, is captivating and well-written.

mbsch April 30 2005, 02:19:09 UTC

Thanks. It's the only one that really came to me out of nowhere. The rest followed because I felt like four lines wasn't enough.

tiredbuthyper April 30 2005, 03:48:59 UTC

I know what you mean.