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[tiredbuthyper]

Another poem I would like feedback on. It's more "finished" than the other one, which I have completely torn apart and recrafted

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WOW

[beyond_divine13]

This poem gave me two types of feelings, it gave me a warm embracing type feeling, and yet it has an eerie kind of mood. Overall I like it and I wish I could have written something like this.

Re: WOW

[tiredbuthyper]

Thank you. :]