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[rollercoaster96]

I'm afraid of what is to come in the next words I write to you. I've been writing this letter to you for months now in my mind. I've finally found the courage to put it in print, to actually let you know how I feel. I fear your response. Are you going to understand? Will you feel the same way? Or shall I just fetch the broom to sweep up the

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[s0methingvague_]

Good luck and best of wishes <3

...and welcome to the community!
haha <3 -Taylor

[rollercoaster96]

Thanks! =)

[manderz_400]

Wow that was beautifully written. Best of luck to you <3333

[rollercoaster96]

thank you!

[darkfrost121288]

I don't know you,
but that was brilliant,
to the use of each paragraph, sentence, and word.
best of luck!

[rollercoaster96]

wow... thanks! =)

like it said... it was something I had been writing in my head for a long time... revised and edited to perfection(by my standards)... now if only I could let him read it. *sigh*

[wasteofpaint31]

thanks for making me cry Kasey! shhhh, no one can know I'm secretly a little bit emo. that really got to me. the only suggestion I could even think to offer would be the sentence, "The look in your eyes when you looked at me, so deep and caring. You loved another though." could maybe be changed to, "The look in your eyes when you looked at me, so deep and caring although you loved another."

wonderful, beautiful imagery. you never fail to impress me.

[rollercoaster96]

I made you cry??

Well I cried when I wrote it... months ago.

=)