Comments | _melodic_: Tender (Harry/Draco; NC-17)

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Tender (Harry/Draco; NC-17)

Jan 24, 2017 20:36

Title: Tender
Author: _melodic_
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~3,120
Warnings/Content: Masturbation. Hand Jobs. Frottage. Blow Jobs. Anal Fingering. Rimming. Anal Sex. Dirty Talk. Post-Anal Fingering. Mild Come Play. Magical Lube. Shameless Smut.
Summary: Draco comes home, horny as hell, and makes use of a mysterious lube left by the ( Read more... )

fiction, contains: anal fingering, slash, contains: multiple orgasms, contains: anal sex, contains: facials, contains: wanking, contains: frottage, rating: nc-17, gift, contains: hand jobs, genre: smut, pairing: harry/draco, contains: rimming, era: post hogwarts, contains: blowjobs, contains: dirty talk

Comments 24

felixfvlicis January 25 2017, 23:40:19 UTC

Oh, what I would give to be a fly on that wall. I read this last night before I went to sleep, and I decided that I should sit with it for a while before commenting. And then, I read it again, and oh. The whole thing was just so effortlessly done. I love Draco's neediness and Harry's slow, methodical response to it -- he knows what Draco needs and he's willing to lay himself open for Draco to just take. Those more intimate moments would fall flat if you hadn't used trust as their foundation.

Also, I'm jealous that you can crank out a 3,120-word fic full of all of the kinks and I'm hiding in a corner, spazzing out over mine. Lol. Practice makes perfect, I suppose. ;)

*slow clap*

♥

_melodic_ January 26 2017, 14:56:47 UTC

Ahh you are too good to me with your kind and generous words<33

I know there was a TON of smut so I am super pleased you also picked up on the sweet intimacy, trust and love between them. It's clear Draco is certainly the spoiled one in this relationship but Harry is only too happy to indulge him.

Aww, your kinks and the portrayal of them is going to be amazing! I just know it! I just happened to start writing with tons of smut so it sticks with me, haha. If anything things get tricky for me when I need to reel in the smut. XD

Thank you for your lovely comment! <33

gracerene January 26 2017, 02:44:14 UTC

Oooo, seriously hot!! I cannot believe how much smut you managed to squeeze in here. That lube certainly seems potent, not that Harry or Draco are complaining!

_melodic_ January 26 2017, 14:53:50 UTC

Hehe thanks so much! It was a very smutty day for me when I wrote it.... er I guess? Haha sounds so wrong.

Thank you for reading and commenting! <3

sesheta_66 January 26 2017, 04:00:34 UTC

Guh! So much love and adoration - and, of course, passion. And holy hell, that's some lube! :D

_melodic_ January 26 2017, 14:53:17 UTC

Hehe thank you so much! Yes the lube needs some work for sure... or does it? ;]

enchanted_jae January 27 2017, 19:54:23 UTC

Holy Hogwarts!

Rowr!

_melodic_ January 28 2017, 14:13:27 UTC

Hehe thank you!

smirkingcat January 27 2017, 20:05:40 UTC

just wow!
as i self tried to write smut - i think it's just amazing how effortless, hot and sexy your smut comes across!
really amazing! you are fantastic in that regard.
i am so deeply impressed
and wow for the hotness and the sexiness and the awesomeness of this nice smutty story!

_melodic_ January 28 2017, 14:14:32 UTC

Awww thank you so much!

Haha I have such a fondness for smut but yeah this fiction really got away from me when it came to all the sex XD

Thank you for your lovely comment! I'm so glad you liked this story! :D