She Ran... COMPLETE

May 20, 2008 10:01

If you have a bit of time I'd really like you all to read this and give me some feedback.  I know it's been a loooong wait but the completed story is now available.

She ran.  She had been running for what felt like days through the strangely empty canyons made by the glass and steel towers around her.  Still he kept up with her.  The pain in her ( Read more... )

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sabrinanineteen May 20 2008, 16:33:24 UTC
Cool.

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rane_falls May 21 2008, 01:46:42 UTC
*shudders slightly*
coolness. well done! <3

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