The Y-Data: Lost Genesis ch1
This took me longer to post than I thought. XD;;; If you've seen the first draft, this is a lot different, although the plot structure is still the same. I haven't picked at a fic this much, possibly never, and I'd probably still be doing it, but I suppose I should move on to the next chapter sometime this year. XD; Well, here we go
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Hello. You don't know me but I just had to comment since I've been wanting to read something Lost Jerusalem-related (and if it involves Yeshua, Mary and Wilhelm, all the better) since I don't know how long to the point that I've been whoring every damn Mary Magdalene fictional novels I could get my hands on. Yes, that bad.
There was something inately mysterious, almost ephemeral, to your prose which constantly moved me. From the elegant writing to the fascinating portrayal of the characters and the limitless possibilities for their growth and to the brief view we get of the world they live in, this piece has surely gotten my attention, or at least from what my oh-so-long attention-span can accomplish.
A cynical and sardonic Wilhelm needed a bit of getting used to for my part, nevertheless, I'm intrigued and looking forward for more dynamics with the seemingly naive yet stubborn Glorya.
Keep building ^_^
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Wilhelm is definitely a different person in those days than who he is later on. I really wanted to look at who Wilhelm was to begin with, and how he came to be the person we meet in the games.
The next chapter should be posted soon, and it'll be the first one from Wilhelm's point of view. Thanks for commenting! ^-^
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