What a wonderful story!vesuvianiteJuly 4 2012, 20:39:11 UTC
I was in tears, at the end.
I love the way you just let the boys' "getting to know each other/love each other" journey play out, and didn't introduce the peril of Jeff catching up with them until the end.
I have a soft spot for http://j2-everafter.livejournal.com/ and this would fit right in there. I know that's a "challenge fic" site, and they probably require that stories be written specifically for each challenge round, but if not--if you could just post this story at their next round--I'm sure the readership there would love it.
This right here! This is why I friended you! I've read so many of your stories and I love every one. I even love your user name cause I love that play. I always know that if I go to one of your stories it will exceed all expectations, and this was no exception. I love that there was no cliche misunderstandings betwen J2 that you see in all the ro/coms. They communicated and were honest with each other which was more real and shows that they will have a real happily ever after. This was made of pure win! -K:-)
This is beautiful...like Jensen's-face beautiful. I'm amazed how you were able to make the story your own, call in the little important tidbits from the movie and leave me with that wonderful Disney feeling at the end.
Your writing is exquisite. I laughed along with the boys in Vegas like I had been matching them shot for shot. It felt just as difficult for me to read Misha and Jared revealing the truth as it was for them to break the news themselves.
I just discovered your love 'verse a few weeks ago (and Damn!), then I was thrilled to find that you are still writing new pieces when I found this. I found you through your holy trinity trilogy, and while I'm not much into RPS, you're writing was so excellent I just had to give your other pieces a chance. SO glad I did. "Best fics EVER!" Just have to end by saying your Misha is amazing in every way possible. Please consider making him a central character at some point because you write him SO WELL.
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I love this so much.
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I love the way you just let the boys' "getting to know each other/love each other" journey play out, and didn't introduce the peril of Jeff catching up with them until the end.
I have a soft spot for http://j2-everafter.livejournal.com/ and this would fit right in there. I know that's a "challenge fic" site, and they probably require that stories be written specifically for each challenge round, but if not--if you could just post this story at their next round--I'm sure the readership there would love it.
Again, congrats on a totally awesome story.
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Your writing is exquisite. I laughed along with the boys in Vegas like I had been matching them shot for shot. It felt just as difficult for me to read Misha and Jared revealing the truth as it was for them to break the news themselves.
I just discovered your love 'verse a few weeks ago (and Damn!), then I was thrilled to find that you are still writing new pieces when I found this. I found you through your holy trinity trilogy, and while I'm not much into RPS, you're writing was so excellent I just had to give your other pieces a chance. SO glad I did. "Best fics EVER!" Just have to end by saying your Misha is amazing in every way possible. Please consider making him a central character at some point because you write him SO WELL.
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