Artwork

[_neko_mistress]

Hey, I need some feedback.
I drew my character "Akana Muyo" last night and finished it today. It's still in sketch format of course.
But I'd like to know. Does it look okay? Or should I work more on the design...

Comments

[clueless_patty]

WOW! It's very cute and well drawn! There's probably more detailing and stuff that you will do on a good copy right? Well, overall it's great! ^_^ KEEP IT UP!

-Pat

[_neko_mistress]

Hmm...this is the finished product w/o inking. XD;;
Thanks for the feedback. *marks things down on her art feedback thingy* x3

[geominorai]

^^ Looks good. Though in a technical viewpoint... There's a proportional problem with the hips, notice that the hips seem to be wider than the shoulder-to-shoulder length. Normal humanoid forearms are unable to produce a curve as shown as well as the forearm being way longer than the upper arm. Also the neck may be a bit too long. =. XD Note that these are compared to a humanoid skeleton. =P And... hehe, nice ears. XD ^^;

[_neko_mistress]

Nyaa....I took that hard. XD
Thanks. <3

Yeah, she has big elfie ears. LOL

And yes, I need to work on proportions. X_x
Arms, legs, and neck. Ugh.

*runs off to practice* x3

[sic_re_vera]

I really like the one on the lower right, of them all, I think the side profile needs the most work.

[_neko_mistress]

Yes, the profile is my worse ever thing to draw. *randomly dies*
I hate drawing them. ><
If you notice...I rarely draw people in their profile view, XD

Thanks for the comment. I needed the feedback. =)

[_neko_mistress]

heh, yeah it was going to be a 'serious' expression. But it kinda got twisted wrong when I messed the hair up. >< (profile view)

Yeah, that was supposed to be her 'bitching'. But it kinda looks like she is laughing instead. ugh

Thanks. ^^ I need alot of input to help me work better on my artwork. My mom always tells me it's all 'good'. It's really good that you guys are honest. THANKS! =D