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[_newnoise_]

i pulled myself from this heap of self destruction. i looked around and saw the sun shining through the trees. i could hear birds singing in the crisp morning air. i looked over towards you and caught your stare. for a moment everything else disapears and all i can focus on is your eyes. i think about the night before. the alcohol flowing like

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[steele_an_apple]

Oh Kevin, I love you, but I tire of your unreadable entries. What is so wrong with capital letters at the beginning of sentences? And complete sentences? I would also like to introduce you to my good friend the Paragraph. She loves to be used. Use her, don't abuse her.

[_newnoise_]

but garret. this is such an enjoyable style of writing. stream of consciousness. this is how i think. lower case letters. fragments. all in one paragraph. enjoy.

[steele_an_apple]

Oh dear,
It's plainly obvious that you enjoy your stream of consciousness, and I'm sure it's quite useful in private. Kevin, I refuse to enjoy it before I can understand it.