SNUPIN fic. Remipunx's 2º sonfic challenge

[_noesumeragi_]

Well, at least here I am with my fic for remipunx's second Songfic Challenge. Oh, oh, emotion, the winner will be elected at the end of the month, and this time the price is LJ paid time, or icon space! and their pic, of course.

So... read and enjoy!

TITLE: Careful about what you wish forAUTHOR: noe

Comments

[busaikko]

Blown away! I don't think I've ever read such a good description of the werewolf inside Remus--the details of the smells and the colour and the yearning to get out... The Shrieking Shack incident has been done so many times that to find an original take on it is amazing! Good Work!

[_noesumeragi_]

Thank you so much! I was aware this "plot" was quite unoriginal, I'm so glad you thought my take was interesting enough...
I've always felt curious about the werewolf, thinking of it as another "mind" inside Remus' body, battling against his human self and at the same time, being his best ally. Not only "something" to be ridden off...

[ex_mikazuki336]

I think I have to agree with the person above. I like all the details about the werewolf inside Remus! So lovely.

You in your animagus form will be my cage, subtler than the Shrieking Shack, but a cage, still.

I really liked that sentence. And the whole last paragraph, so sad. You've made me want to work on fanfiction again! That's amazing in itself.. I'd just about lost the will to. Thank you. <3

[_noesumeragi_]

If I have helped you somehow, I'm glad! :D

I suppose the story itself is sad, it sprang of that last song paragraph, If it's not Love/Then it's the Bomb/That will bring us together. I've always seen the Prank as something like that, the "bomb" that explodes the tension between Severus and Remus... a conclusion of sorts.

And I think of the werewolf as another part of Remus' being, colouring his self heavily, and rather aware of the things happening around him. I'm glad you liked that view! :)

[pixychelle]

I found your take on the wolf in this interesting. We normally only think of it as a subordinate personality to Remus or an extra one within him, so I liked the idea that it doesn't like being a human any more than Remus doesn't like being the wolf.

A few typos:
the hunger is railing inside me, and so I sped upsped should be speed
They, humans, are no so far ahead No should be not
I want to spat that I'm naked and tired and cold spat should be spit
Danm myself Danm should be damn

[remipunx]

Ack, those are my fault, bad beta, bad beta!!

[_noesumeragi_]

don't worry, hon, you did enough!!! :)

[_noesumeragi_]

I'm glad you liked my take on the matter; I believe the werewolf is rather aware of what is happening to him, and is a real part of Remus' being, one that "owns" Remus' human body as much as Remus owns his werewolf one.

Thanks for the tips, I've fixed them already :)

[drusillas_rain]

lovely

[_noesumeragi_]

Thanks, glad you liked it! :)

[aranluc]

Hum... interesante. Explorando el lado animal de Remus... Aunque mi inglés es chungo chungo y creo que voy a tener que leermelo otra vez para enterarme de como leche se salva la situación, que a la primera me ha quedao confusa. Definitivamente debería ir a clase de ingles...

Me he estado leyendo las otras entradas, la de Tom Riddle era muy buena, bastante fuera de canon, pero buena. Mosqueaba bastante... Es curioso, como te tengo a ti y a alguna loca por Snape mas, por un momento pensé que todos los otros fics serían de snape... ains...

Pues ya te he votao.

[_noesumeragi_]

ehhhh... tan complicado ha quedado el inglés? no sé si debería alegrarme o no, x lo que a mí me toca... ^^UUUUU

Lo mismo lo podía traducir, no creo que me llevara más de media hora. En fins. MUCHAS GRACIAS POR VOTARME!!!!!!!!!!! me da penita, xq siendo justos, tenías que haber votado al fic de Tom... A mí también me gustó bastante, y me pasó como a tí, pensé que era de Snape con Lily. E incluso en un momento bajo, justo al principio, Draco y Hermione. Pero que luego fuera Tom... Está chulo. En lista de Remipunx casi todos son fans de Draco, yo soy la única Snapeloca... XD