I've written a little Snapebabble, that means 200 words on my beloved Potion Master. Considering how bad I am at writting this kind of short stories, I'm happily surprised. Even more because... well, I wrote exactly the required two hundred words in the first try! :9
Title: Goodbye
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Not betaed. Feel free to point me any
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Je, yo tambien me he cortado el pelo, va Gato y me dice: "pareces Chenoa". Si todavía le sigo queriendo después de eso, es que ya no tiene remedio la cosa. En finch... (ya plantaré foticos en mi journal)
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About the other thing: short hair rulez:D I have it too:P
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Well done! If only Fawkes could have testified to the Wizengamot on Severus' behalf. Maybe then he would not have had to live his long life in lonely hiding...
Noe, will I embarass you if I point out one small typo? In the line 'free to came back here...' I think that 'came' should be 'come'.
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And yes, pity Fakwes cannot talk and testify on Severus' aid. It's sad, because you got my meaning... A ridiculously long life, a lonely life, along Fawkes, who flied to him after Albus' death... his only friend for years and years... without be able to come back and say goodbye Albus.
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*snifff*
And thanks for the typo, It's already corrected. :)
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I want to see the hair!!! Picture please!!
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And no! sorry, no pictures of me. I hate it, I always look horrible. And Harry-ish haircur is a very good descrption, really...
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I'm so curious about your new hair cut. But really I'm pretty sure you can't shock me. I had three times a bald head... and when I say bald I mean there were maximum three millimeter hair on my head *g*. And the last time I shaved (!!! yes, you know this electric razor...I own one) my head was in February (2004)... let just say since then I have a selection of hats and caps :D
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No tomb should look this new, not when everything else has faded with the time
I think it has to be just faded with time because you use "time" here uncountable.
And and another red feather fells and flies.
I think it has to be "falls" (3. person singular present) instead of fells or "fell and flew" (past tense).
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And you shaved! wow, you are gryffindor brave, hon... Me not so much, Harry-ish haircut is good description. It's a bit messy, with a little fringe towards the left, and shorter and upright in the rear. My hair is now black with some honey locks, from a previous experiment who was supposed to get my hair red. More or less... U
But I also have a hat! I think I'm going to use it every day...
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