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[lena108]

Title Aesthesia
Author lena108
Claim Lexaeus/Zexion
Theme #32 - Fantasy
Rating NC-17
Summary Nobodies are creatures of routine. Lexaeus decides to do something different for once. Lexaeus/Zexion.

Comments

[okami_hu]

Höhöhöhöhö. That made me chuckle quite wickedly. It was nice to see Lexaeus actually having a personality and the pairing is an OTP as well. You also kept them emotionless but still close, sharing an air of comraderie. Good work.

However, corrections:

[...]Xemnas’ throne, which was quite large. It would be a bit small, but they could manage. -- The two sentences slightly contradict each other. You might want to rephrase it, or remove one of them entirely.

I think we mostly use 'lubricant', or 'lube' instead of 'lubrication' though it's not such a dire mistake.

That's all I think, aside one tiny spelling mistake - "as Lexaeus captured hi lips once more".

[chocoemerald]

nice one!! :3

[effective_drug]

Gods I love this pairing! This was nicely done, great work! x3