Comments | _pocket_rocket_: Born Again: Chapter 11

_pocket_rocket_

Born Again: Chapter 11

Jul 22, 2005 14:38

Rating: Adults Only<--like this will stop anyone underage from reading it...
Characters: Brian and Justin, to begin with; the rest of the gang, later.
Warning: Justin/Ethan; Hetero-Michael; drugs <--Hee hee; Some really embarrassing grammatical errors (probably)
Disclaimer: All characters of "Queer as Folk" belong to me! and any minute, I'm ( Read more... )

born again, *series*

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princesskirsty July 22 2005, 22:17:46 UTC

i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove high!brian i wanna hug him and tuck him into bed and read him a story!!!

_pocket_rocket_ July 23 2005, 06:16:18 UTC

Really? Hm. Well, that's high!me, too. Do *I* get a bedtime story? >.<

princesskirsty July 23 2005, 13:00:58 UTC

once upon a time there was a princess called Kirsty who was the prettiest princess in all the world. One day she went on the internet and discovered through her princess friends two young princes called Brian and Justin. Prince Brian was a naughty, naughty prince who liked lots of other young princes and Prince Justin was a sweet young prince who was deeply in love with Prince Brian. So Princess Kirsty grew to love these two princes and through her love for them met the lovely mysterious Pocket Rocket who was a rebel from a far off land and they all lived happily ever after. THE END.

_pocket_rocket_ July 23 2005, 16:11:24 UTC

we all lived happily ever after in this weird hippie commune where sexuality and monogamy doesn't matter? cuz that's like, the only you're very strange menage-e-four would work out...

you're a weirdo. and i'm not. at all. mwahahahaha.

thanks for the story. you'd give jk a run for her money.

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futureadexec July 22 2005, 22:35:53 UTC

I too am a fan of high Brian. I really liked this chapter. The whole Michael/Daphne relationship is developing nicely too.

_pocket_rocket_ July 23 2005, 06:17:41 UTC

Thank you. You know, I'm finding a straight!Michael more fun to write. Weird.

ranksy July 23 2005, 01:21:00 UTC

I'm really loving this story! High!Brian is too adorable. And I like how you've written Mikey; he's still a little bit of Mikey, but straight, and sans whining. Good times. I'm enjoying his and Daphne's relationship.

Can't wait for more! (Shitty about losing your disc. Thanks for not letting that deter you!) :)

_pocket_rocket_ July 23 2005, 06:19:29 UTC

Yeah, I figured, with Michael straight, he wouldn't be all whiney when Brian becomes involved with Justin. I probably wrote him staright cuz I was too lazy to write a B/M conflict plot. It works and that's all that matters.

_alicesprings July 23 2005, 01:50:44 UTC

This story's great! I just went back and re-read cos I'd forgotten where we were up to, and I really love all of it so far.
The progression of their relationship is very interesting to me, and it was intersting that you didn't show what happened at the brunch, but rather Brian's flashbacks. I can totally see him freaking out about the "nice couple" comments, and I love that Brian held Justin's hand under the table! He could be so sweet if he tried!
I'm enjoying this a lot, and I hope you update soon.

_pocket_rocket_ July 23 2005, 06:22:35 UTC

Thanks! I didn't want to show the brunch cuz I thought that it was REALLY lame, Brian holding Justin's hand under the table. So, I decided to write a scene in which Brian admits to it being lame and voila! a high!Brian.

_alantie July 23 2005, 05:45:16 UTC

Best thing you've written, Pookie.

_pocket_rocket_ July 23 2005, 06:24:38 UTC

Really? Aw, thanks, Honeybear. :hugs you: