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Fiction: In Between Slumber

Dec 15, 2005 10:09

Title: In Between Slumber
Summary: I wrote this a little while ago, when I couldn't sleep. It doesn't really have a plot. Or a purpose. Other than it reflects the mood I was in. It's set post-S5 and has no beginning or end, really. Just a small scene. Tra la la. Enjoy.
Rating: Adults only
Genre: Fluff

( In Between Slumber )

*standalones*, in between slumber

Comments 13

ranksy December 15 2005, 18:50:44 UTC

This was great! I always love your fic. Thanks for sharing!

_pocket_rocket_ December 15 2005, 22:02:31 UTC

Yay! You're welcome. And thanks for commenting.

princesskirsty December 15 2005, 20:59:34 UTC

lalalalalalala

_pocket_rocket_ December 15 2005, 21:57:06 UTC

That has got to be the most coherent response, thank you very much. >.< Retard.

princesskirsty December 15 2005, 21:58:07 UTC

YOU HEART ME!! mhmm, u can't avoid it. *big smooch*

_alicesprings December 15 2005, 21:04:29 UTC

Oh man!!! That was fabulous, and it kinda bought a tear to my eye, Brian so needs to move to NY!

And as Brian’s lips turn down, as each breath he takes is punctuated by a small vocalization, Justin falls in love all over again.

I ♥ that line.

I really love it, thanks for sharing.

happier_bunny December 15 2005, 22:21:52 UTC

I was just thinking yesterday that you haven't written in awhile and then today this...so exciting.

This was beautifully bittersweet. Nice to see them trying to work things out, dealing with it, and not breaking up or avoiding their feelings.

thanks for sharing!

_pocket_rocket_ December 15 2005, 22:39:30 UTC

Haha. Yeah, even I was thinking I haven't posted in a while. So, I decided to stick this one up, despite the fact it's just a snippet of something that could be longer and better. Oh well. I'm kind of pleased with the way it turned out.

I figured after how many years of struggle they'd have a situation like Justin moving to NY down pat.

Thanks for commenting.

darksylvia December 16 2005, 09:07:09 UTC

Oh, very sweet! I love it.

Although I still categorically deny the Justin giggles!

_pocket_rocket_ December 16 2005, 14:49:40 UTC

Well, personally, I think everyone giggles. And in the middle of the night, when I'm groggy and out of it, giggles sort of erupt. It's awful, but the only time I giggle more is when I'm really fucking stoned. I can't be the only one who giggles. Of course, it's probably different for men... Oh well. Let's just pretend Justin giggles and Brian cackles like a witch.

darksylvia December 17 2005, 08:46:21 UTC

I've come to the conclusion that it's different defintions of giggling.

To me, it means high pitched laughter, probably a little insane.

Justin/Randy's voice is way too deep to make what, to me, constitutes a giggle. Plus, it sort of unnecessarily feminizes him. But there are stories like yours and some others where I like the rest enough that I just pretend I didn't read the giggling :D