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Jan 08, 2004 18:57

For Paris and Gretchen and my mindly like mind... i dont know why,or how ( Read more... )

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_the_last January 9 2004, 03:16:40 UTC
"Daddy said to grow up strong
But I cant when my legs sit on heels ten inches long."

"i looked in a dictionary saturday just to make sure there was a meaning to the word"free"."

you are really good at this. i wish stuff like this came to me as easy as they do you.

dorian.

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_prettyplease January 9 2004, 04:31:35 UTC
gosh darn.
well thank you for picking out sentances, i love when people do that and i can see what they like and relate to.
you can write just as well im sure, the only differance is feelings come differently to us,so it just dosnt seem the same

::shrug::

anyways: thanks, your one person who has compliments on my poems capable of launching me into the skies.

oh and i added another part, incase you wanted to read that...?

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_the_last January 9 2004, 04:35:29 UTC
"everyone cries at night and everyone yells at the world"

so true.

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_prettyplease January 9 2004, 05:05:06 UTC
toooo true.

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_prettyplease January 9 2004, 04:35:16 UTC
thank you so much olivia.
thank you for commenting on every poem
thank you for being there when i was down
you always cheer me up, always.
oh and ya, i have a poem dedicated to u, but
i pace my self posting poems so itll be up like...sundayish?

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_prettyplease January 9 2004, 05:13:59 UTC
oh i wish i was there to hug and squeeeze you.
you deserve that, well no, WAAAAAY more than that.
never stop being my friend.

i miss you may more.

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argxmexpretty January 9 2004, 04:42:15 UTC
i cant tell you how much i adore you for holding my dark blood as yer own. i need help on this. im very fearful that i will soon destroy myself. perhaps not now, but my producing generation. thanks towards you. gretchen

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does this make sense AT ALL?!!!? _prettyplease January 9 2004, 05:01:31 UTC
gret gret gret dont demise.
i know you wont. yer to strong for that.
talk to me, every night if you have to.
talk to someone, forever will do.
i want to help you, why? because you deserve none of this.
your far far up on the good people ladder. i would shove some people on that ladder for you, your to grand for anything else.

MUAW

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eyelineryou January 10 2004, 22:35:40 UTC
i love that line, and im so happy that i can claim it.
im even happier that u enjoyed it.

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the_rockstarr January 9 2004, 05:35:26 UTC
i really like the dictionary line
and the everyone cries at night and yells at the world one

this poem is really really good like all of them are amazing but i like this one a lot
<3 peace

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eyelineryou January 10 2004, 22:43:18 UTC
ya those seem to be really popular ones, wich is rad, because the everyone cries at night- is such an honest line, and even if i didnt look in the dictionary its a feeling bold people inquire a lot.

thank u so much, im so glad u comment on this a lot, it means the world.
*muaw!*

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the_rockstarr January 12 2004, 01:13:51 UTC
i think everyone can relate to those lines
i think no matter how many ppl admit it that most ppl have cried at night and yell at the world
the dictionary line was just flat out brilliant
*muaw* WRAPSARMSAROUND
"let the new night bring you peace"

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