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_the_last January 25 2004, 16:10:52 UTC
"Everything raced by so fast, so fast my mommy couldn’t think.
For there lay her failure soaked in endings.
And...
The suicide note. Suspended in Ink"

that last part was like... boom

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eyelineryou January 26 2004, 18:38:13 UTC
boom bam maybe?!!??!

thank you so so much. u make me smile because ur always the first to comment.

i live for that.

:P

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the_rockstarr January 25 2004, 16:51:57 UTC
Tell sister I love her. She’s a misery.
Tell popular girl I adore her. She will fail eventually.
Tell the neighbor who corrupted me. My body he can no longer touch.
Tell my best friend she owns my hatred. She always did look in that mirror to much.

i like that

and this...

I wish I could fake that smile a day longer.
Just to make you happy.

i could keep copying and pasting until the whole fucking poem was here
youre so good at this...

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eyelineryou January 26 2004, 18:37:19 UTC
wow thank you.

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obsessedwithpan January 25 2004, 17:13:30 UTC
wow im speechless.......... thats ............... soooo goooooood.... wooooow

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eyelineryou January 26 2004, 18:39:00 UTC
oh gosh.

thank you so much vern.

but is it as good as sex with jhonny?

.no. but perhaps close?

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obsessedwithpan January 26 2004, 19:46:47 UTC
soooo close just a wee bit off hehehehhe

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eyelineryou January 26 2004, 18:39:41 UTC
i plan to never stop.

i loved ur comment. it means a lot to me livvi.

thank you.

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isntitlovely January 25 2004, 17:43:32 UTC
"To the tedious suicide letters painting ballet recitals on my walls"
"Could you blame anyone for detesting that house?
Assembled neatly draped with cobwebs, painfully tranquil in an overpriced blouse."
I really like those parts, along with others...it was morbid and wonderful. You are a truly deep person.

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eyelineryou January 27 2004, 22:01:26 UTC
wow.thank you so so much karly. your so utterly cool.

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