LJ Idol Topic Week 2 - “Um…”

May 27, 2013 20:45

This week in my latest writing endeavor we were given our choice of 4 topics submitted by competitors from previous seasons and none of them were easy for me. ( See here for all four choices.) So after my initial 2-day “wtf” brainstorm I kept coming back to my knee-jerk response to “Um…”. So here it is, but a little background first ( Read more... )

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roina_arwen May 28 2013, 17:44:33 UTC
I love faeries! Of course, a 4" tall fairy will have a head maybe 3/4" long, which makes that a rather small strawberry, but otherwise this was adorable!

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_rabidwombat_ May 29 2013, 01:09:56 UTC
hahaahahaaa Touche!

This was one of the things I filled in on the fly when I was initially writing it, fully intending to properly consider it when I edited, but then read right over it. Next time I'll make sure to leave a _____. lmao Thanks so much for the constructive criticism.

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bewize May 28 2013, 20:28:01 UTC
LOL. Run indeed.

This was adorable. :)

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_rabidwombat_ May 29 2013, 01:10:13 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it. It will be continued at a future date.

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medleymisty May 28 2013, 23:44:40 UTC
My mind kind of wandered around the afraid of cats notation at the top, and I was trying to think of possibilities for the C word. That was interesting. ;)

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_rabidwombat_ May 29 2013, 01:11:56 UTC
I was hoping to amuse without being overly cheesy. It's a fine line and I hope I was able to succeed. :)

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medleymisty May 29 2013, 01:28:32 UTC
Oh yeah! It's all good - I'm just incredibly sleep-deprived right now. I should really go to bed. And it was fun and it amused me, so there! :)

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_rabidwombat_ May 29 2013, 01:32:47 UTC
haha Sweet dreams!

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witches May 29 2013, 07:45:44 UTC
This was such a fun read and I loved the imagery :D

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cheshire23 May 29 2013, 13:39:04 UTC
I love the huge strawberries. :)

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