breaking open strangest nights of stars meteors crashing into waves surrounded by moving trees along the shores of breaking dreams greys seem to make the sky scream.
best thing you have ever written! great imagery.
take me now and love me never. a little cliche but it has nice meter.
the rest of it was fine. It didn't really move me, but it didn't make me wanna die.
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the first one is especially well written and expressed creatively.
good job:)
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meteors crashing into waves surrounded by
moving trees along the shores of breaking dreams
greys seem to make the sky scream.
best thing you have ever written! great imagery.
take me now and love me never.
a little cliche but it has nice meter.
the rest of it was fine. It didn't really move me, but it didn't make me wanna die.
love you. kiroku!
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