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xelloss_poo March 2 2005, 04:31:41 UTC
AWWWW!! *coos* This was just a really sweet chapter. :)

And isn't Tezuka going to come back to a nice little surprise when he comes back. ^__^ An even more molestable Ryoma, sleeping and cuddling his jacket. *gigglz* SQUEE!!

Anywho, I really like this story so far. ^^ The characterizations are good and I can't wait to read what happens next. Luv!

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_rikku_chan_ March 3 2005, 01:26:04 UTC
Aww, thanxs for reading. Glad you like it. =^___^=

Yesh. It might be Tezuka's only chance to molest Ryoma since he's in his vulnerable state, hahaha~! XD!! But I don't think that he's the type to take advantage of him. Sometimes, I can't picture that. ^^;

Thanxs! I'll try to update soon. ^___^

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craze_izumi March 2 2005, 09:54:26 UTC
Kyaaaaaaaaaa!!! Love this fic, cause it TEzuRyo^^ TEzuRYo4eva!! please do update soon

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_rikku_chan_ March 3 2005, 01:26:59 UTC
Thank you! ^__^ I'll do my best and try to update soon.

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sakurazuka_jae March 2 2005, 10:24:34 UTC
*gurgles* You just killed me with cute there at the end. I'm enjoying this story a great deal, and look forward to the next part.

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_rikku_chan_ March 3 2005, 01:31:47 UTC
Hee~! Ryoma cuddling Tezuka's jersey is cute and adorable. X3I think it'll kill me too if I saw it on Prince of Tennis, which most likely won't happen. It could though...^^;

Thanxs for reading! =^___^=

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aiwritingfic March 2 2005, 13:45:54 UTC
Oh wow. I loved the bus scene. Fuji and Tezuka being an oasis of silence amidst the noisy crowd. Tezzie reading a novel and Fuji being engrossed in a magazine instead of chattering away ... oh, so in character I fell instantly in love with that scene! *adds to memories*

And then Tezuka being such a buchou and making sure Ryoma gets some sleep, and finding such a great excuse (coz does anyone believe he was telling the truth?). :)

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_rikku_chan_ March 3 2005, 01:39:35 UTC
Yeah, when I was doing my rough sketch of this chapter, I couldn't picture Tezuka and Fuji just BEING in the crowd. Though if there was a gossip or something like that going around, then I can picture Fuji talking with the others. But never Tezuka...he's at best being left alone. XD!! I'm glad that you love the bus scene. I luv it too, haha~! o>W

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anonymous March 3 2005, 06:17:35 UTC
You can never live without me? Aww that's so SWEET!!! *hugsquash*

Anyway, I really like this story; it's quite intriguing even though I have zero knowledge of any of these people, haha.

Hmm...now would be a good time to go back to studying for Socials, no? The significance of the Free Trade Agreement...*wobbles away*

-MGA

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_rikku_chan_ March 4 2005, 21:00:46 UTC
*hugs back* I know. <3!

Thanxs. I'll write the second chapter when I have time...WHICH means finishing off my Health Science short story first...THEN finish up all my Math..THEN study for English test coming up on Tuesday...THEN STUDYING FOR MATH AGAIN FOR THURDSDAY...and yeah...o___o;

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_rikku_chan_ March 4 2005, 21:01:50 UTC
oh wait....nevermind..I typed that wrong...I have a Math test on Wednesday, not Thursday. x____x;

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