I WANT OPINIONS ON THIS

Dec 29, 2005 03:51

Hey Baby...
My makeups running.
I guess I wasn't expecting to cry.

You should have broken out the flare guns before the mascara went on my lashes a little too thick.
You should have sounded the alarm before my liner was pressed on a little to dark.
...Should have broken me down before my cheeks were extra rosey. You said you hated to see the ( Read more... )

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moneybags December 30 2005, 07:40:10 UTC
dear katy,
the beginning part is good. i enjoy the first three lines. thats deep. after that, it starts getting mad confusing. but nice work. my creativity level is at a -10 so i commend you for trying

props, punkass

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alidre86 December 30 2005, 07:41:47 UTC
ugh you and your dumb good writting skills
i love you kid and miss you terribly
im going to break faces soon
his in particular
seriously
hes going to die

a couple times

<3

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