" you can dress me up in diamonds, you can dress me up in dirt "

Jul 30, 2004 09:23


hey guyz ... i just finished writing this poem and i wanted to know what everyone thought ...

They Day He Broke Our Hearts

He left us that day both with broken hearts
After thirteen years my life was being torn apart
The only thing I could do was cry ...
And hope that time would quickly pass by
I missed him so much ... why couldn't he be there ?
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sunny_x_days July 30 2004, 09:01:21 UTC
Aw Liz, that was so so incredibly amazing. And I'm so sorry. :[ If you ever need anything, you know where to reach me. <3

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_sh0oting_star July 30 2004, 09:13:01 UTC
thanks em .... i love you ... crazy 3s forever .. and my sister tilli die <3

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wOW cali_dreaming July 31 2004, 13:51:42 UTC
liz that was really amazing your such an amazing writer...i'm sorry about all of if but if you need to talk to me you can i went though the same stuff and i'm here ... love jamie <3

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star_dust11 August 2 2004, 07:42:17 UTC
omg .. liz you are an amazing writer where did you come up with all that stuff ! i know that we hhaven't talked in a while but always know that i'm here for you if you need someone to talk to .. at anytime day or night :)

love you !
-- > * alison

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xtoxictaste04x August 2 2004, 15:56:42 UTC
lizzzie wow that was such an awesum poem! i would never b able 2 write sumthin lyk that! u r such an amazing writer u noe that i am walwais here for u no matter wut!!we deffinitely need 2 talk on the fone or get 2gether i need 2 cheer u up!! mayb muh singing will help! lol
luv u grl
conjoined twins 4 life
alysssa

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_summer_l0ve August 3 2004, 06:35:54 UTC
wow liz that was so good - i haven't seen / talked to you in forever! i miss you so much! we'll have to see each other soon!

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