I absolutely love this story- poor Harry. You really captured his voice, and I absolutely love Marcone. I think you really managed to keep them both in character in a way that not many people manage to. Way to go! I hope you continue this soon- I erally do. I'll be waiting with baited breath.
Soon! I hope. I'm currently going back, rereading, and making some edits. I haven't written for a while, so I'm hoping to pick up any loose threads and pull them back in before going further. :)
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