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Four drabbles

Jul 14, 2007 11:28

Title: Four drabbles
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fic: slash, fic: gen, fandom: torchwood, jack/tosh, jack/ianto, fic

Comments 9

ireth July 14 2007, 11:16:28 UTC

They're all so lovely :3 But I especially like the first and third :D

_stolendreams_ July 14 2007, 11:51:31 UTC

Wow that was fast. Thank you. Glad you liked XD

jordle July 14 2007, 14:07:00 UTC

I'm not usually a fan of drabbles but for some reason Torchwood drabbles are always great.

I really loved the second one (But they were all great!)

_stolendreams_ July 14 2007, 14:16:40 UTC

Thanks. Drabbles aren't everyones thing, but I'm glad you liked these ones.
Especially the second one since it's my personal favourite

1_mad_squirrel July 14 2007, 15:29:53 UTC

These are wonderful. I especially like the first and the last.

_stolendreams_ July 14 2007, 15:36:49 UTC

Thank you. The first one has been done a thousand times but the image wouldn't leave me head, it demanded to be written, I'm glad you liked it.

akeyoftime July 15 2007, 20:48:52 UTC

These are all fantastic! I found the second and the fourth especially grabbing. The sparing use of dialogue is really effective - what is there stands out, and the tableaus create lovely imagery and emotions.

exuberantself July 18 2007, 01:22:34 UTC

Oh, how I love the way you write. I almost don't want to mention any favorite parts because everything is so tight and beautiful, but I just keep reading "If there had been any reason but love behind the betrayal, Ianto would already be retconned and gone. But love Jack can understand." over and over.

SO PRETTY! :-D

_stolendreams_ July 18 2007, 16:13:08 UTC

XD Thank you.

I have to say that little bit was written a while ago before I actually knew where I was going to use it. Even though I ended up having to cut a few words from the first one to make it drabble length that was the part I refused to touch.