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Wanting and Needing (Ianto/Owen) 15

Jul 30, 2007 23:06

Title: Wanting and Needing
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fic: slash, fandom: torchwood, ianto/owen, jack/ianto, fic

Comments 18

dancy_dreamer July 31 2007, 02:01:36 UTC

I really love this!

I think you captured Ianto and Owens feelings really well. It's not romantic, it's just need!

Well Done.....again ♥

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_stolendreams_ July 31 2007, 17:50:35 UTC

Thaank you :)

hazelayes July 31 2007, 10:49:04 UTC

Ditto all of the good comments above.

One of the reasons it worked for me was because you kept the reader on the
outside' of the sex between Ianto and Owen, in the same way you kept the protagonists LOL. "It happened, OK" and that treatment was just right for the way you constructed the story.

Well done :D

_stolendreams_ July 31 2007, 17:53:11 UTC

Thank you.

Yeah I didn't want the sex to be a big deal, despite the relationship being the main part of the story lol.

burntcopper July 31 2007, 12:14:06 UTC

Really, really good. Plus the emotional balance is just right. (is also all in favour of Tosh taking over)

therandomgirlie July 31 2007, 17:45:21 UTC

Just total total love and cookies - this is definately what I picture Ianto and Owens relationship to be. I love it!
*squees*