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Day 8: Make Love Singing Song

Jan 21, 2006 17:45

Title: Make Love Singing Song
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4950
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.

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__substitute__ January 21 2006, 23:07:54 UTC

That, was just. Friggin' amazing. I loved it.

oh_johnny_ January 22 2006, 20:32:50 UTC

Thank you!

isasolan January 22 2006, 00:14:13 UTC

Oh god that was so hot. I think I liked the first time the best, it was so sexy and innocent at the same time.

John stood silently for a minute looking at Paul. He glanced around to make sure no one was looking then he reached out a hand and touched Paul's. Paul looked up at him and saw John was smiling, and he gave a tentative smile of his own. John’s hand reached up and caressed Paul’s face, then he leaned in and brushed Paul’s lips with his own.

I'm not sure why, but I could see this happening very vividly in my head. John glancing around and then holding Paul's hand. Lovely :)

oh_johnny_ January 22 2006, 20:33:38 UTC

Thank you! It is a lovely image, isn't it.

pepper4land January 22 2006, 00:28:15 UTC

A masterpiece from you. I must admit, usually I become a little bit too shy and embarresed reading about those detailed sex-scenes, but your is excellent, very-very carefullly built and every little motion of them physically,were well-grounded and filled with their emotions. So thoughtful, well-built and exciting.Your work interleave with whatsherass`s part so smoothly, it is amazing.

oh_johnny_ January 22 2006, 20:36:24 UTC

Thank you. While I have written hard core sex scenes, frankly I find them a little boring if that's all there is. Much more interesting to bring emotion into it. And, yes, it's extraordinary how closely whateherass and I mirror each other in this, especially as we write from different points of view.

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oh_johnny_ January 22 2006, 20:37:23 UTC

Thank you. The whole 'reckon' part was lots of fun to write :-) And I'm growing rather fond of the three-titted woman, so had to bring her back for a guest appearance!

ichbinderwalrus January 22 2006, 02:37:20 UTC

that was amazing, i really loved it, for some reason the part about the smell of rock and roll and such made me really happy, heh, truly amazing, great job.

oh_johnny_ January 22 2006, 20:37:59 UTC

Thank you. The smell of rock and roll part is probably my favourite bit too.