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Day 13 - Floating In A Most Peculiar Way

May 26, 2006 03:12

Rating: PG, probably
Word Count: 1,333
Disclaimer: I don't own them, this didn't happen.

A/N: Alright. First off, I'm sorry. For what, you ask? For the fact that I haven't paid any attention to this whole thing. That I just read the first 12 chapters now so I could write mine. And I don't think mine is very good. It seems so inconsequential and ( Read more... )

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anglo_don_juan May 26 2006, 18:22:27 UTC

Awwww. That was so sweet and wonderful. =D I'd write more, but then I'd be repeating other people, and that wouldn't accomplish anything. Awesome job.

plasticpepper May 26 2006, 20:17:09 UTC

Awww, heheh. Thanks so much!!

banburytale May 27 2006, 03:11:04 UTC

Wow, I just caught up with this story too, and I have to say that your chapter is just as good as everyone else's. I'm really happy with the way you resolved John's stupidity of the day before, and the breakfast scene was really cute! Good job!

plasticpepper May 27 2006, 04:26:54 UTC

Aww, thank you so much. That means a lot to me, especially since you just caught up with everything so it's all fresh in your mind and you would notice if this didn't flow well. So, thanks!

whatsherass May 30 2006, 03:39:32 UTC

It was VERY nice! No worries at all... Not every chapter of this story needs to be epic! Yours was short, but it was lovely and moved the story forward. Well done! :)

plasticpepper May 31 2006, 00:52:54 UTC

Aww, thanks! I totally agree about not every chapter having to be epic...especially because it's a day per chapter and it's not like every day would have been like OMG WHOA. And especially because our duo had a hectic day the day before my day, I don't think they'd have been doing much...anyway, thanks muchly!

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plasticpepper June 5 2006, 23:05:22 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. And I'm really glad you liked the ending, because endings are usually my worst area.

oceanchild808 June 9 2006, 04:01:28 UTC

I had this in mind to read for so long but I got so caught up in life I forgot! It's really great the way you seamlessly eased into their closeness again. I loved how they didn't want to do anything that day and your descriptions of them feeding each other...very vivid. I saw the whole scene clearly. I agree with everyone-don't be hard on yourself. Well done.

plasticpepper June 9 2006, 20:18:45 UTC

Aw, yay, thanks. I'm glad you thought the breakfast scene was vivid, because I've been trying to work on being really descriptive and...I don't know a good word for it, but imagery-ish in my writing, so I'm glad it seems to be working! Heheh...anyway, thanks again!