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_wordweaver_

A poem I found

Nov 10, 2005 13:56

I found this poem in the back of my diary from 1996. There are crossings out and corrections so I think I wrote it, but if I didn't will someone let me know? If I did write it I am deeply impressed with 18 year old Lisa ( Read more... )

Comments 8

kehleyr November 10 2005, 21:59:57 UTC

Very nice written ;-)!

_wordweaver_ November 11 2005, 08:24:43 UTC

Thank you, sweetie!:P

flame_song November 11 2005, 01:21:45 UTC

Awesome...

_wordweaver_ November 11 2005, 08:24:28 UTC

Thank you!:P

cynical_ghost November 11 2005, 02:21:46 UTC

I love the last several lines.

_wordweaver_ November 11 2005, 08:24:16 UTC

I liked those too. They seem to flow nicely whereas the rest of the poem can be hard to read through. I'm glad you likey. I don't know if I could write something like that anymore, I need to empty my poetry shelf of books and start reading them and get inspired.:P

strange__angels November 11 2005, 15:01:50 UTC

I shall no longer hear the murmers of lovers

mmm. I like that a lot. It seems to resonate with me today for some reason.

you were such a little goth girl ;)

_wordweaver_ November 12 2005, 23:35:31 UTC

I was indeed and she's still there, lurking in some dusty corner of memory. She comes out to play on days like today when I am wearing nowt but black. Or doing your mix tape which stirs old memories...I have just been writing and now my brain still wants to go and play with the muse...

Thank you for your thougtful email today btw. That's all I can say, but I mean it so very much. xxxx