Parachasers 9

[_yaddayadda]

Title: Parachasers OR The Unnatural Interests of Suzumiya Haruhi
Rating: PG-13 for creepy situations and Nagato actually doing something.
Summery: Haruhi finds a new hobby, bad things happen to Kyon.

Comments

[_yaddayadda]

Thank you so much for your comment! I'm glad that the dialogue flows well, it helps that each character has a very distinct speaking style.

[irmess]

Yay. New chapter. *^^*
Great job as always, it was actually one of the more entertaining chapters so far~ Again, the best part are Kyon's internal monologues, especially when he is convincing himself he doesn't like when Itsuki smiles at him xD; (In fact I have vast depths of friendly, platonic feelings for my fellow man. - yeah, right xP)
I also liked Yuki this time, I guess she should just force herself to use more "commestible" language sometimes~
and again, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter ^^

btw, what's actually happening with your computer?

[_yaddayadda]

Thank you for commenting as always!

(In fact I have vast depths of friendly, platonic feelings for my fellow man. - yeah, right xP)
For serious, I think Kyon might be confusing the words "sarcastic" and "platonic" here. Also, "bitchy" and "friendly".

I also liked Yuki this time, I guess she should just force herself to use more "commestible" language sometimes~
Oo, good word! Yuki would probably have much more dialogue in this thing if she would just speak a little more simply...

Re: the computer, oh, various things. This Monday I had a minor crisis when the settings got corrupted and it couldn't log me in to my main user account. Luckily, I could still get at everything through my Admin so I just made a new user and transferred everything. Very annoying though.

Also, my keyboard (which I spilled water on two months ago) has recently been having fits where it acts like someone constantly holding down the left arrow key. That makes typing very... interesting.

[irmess]

Still, I think that in your fic Kyon is a wee bit nicer towards Itsuki than in the novel, in which he basically gets upset just at his sight. :p

As for the typing...well in this case I'm surprised you still have the ardour to write! and you'd better not lose it since it would be a shame to leave this unfinished xD;

mind I added you to friends?

[_yaddayadda]

Still, I think that in your fic Kyon is a wee bit nicer towards Itsuki than in the novel, in which he basically gets upset just at his sight. :p
True, true. Novel-Kyon must have the blood-pressure levels of a 40 year old man with heart disease.

Thankfully, today and yesterday my computer was in a good mood and let me type. Also, Dell should be sending me a new keyboard shortly. Yay!

*Adds you back*

[vanitas_mundi]

Itsuki's tight-lipped smile me me go " .......oh;_;"
(Damn, I get so worked up when my favorite characters suffer, sometimes. Urgh.)

I mean, it's not that I want him to smile at me. It's just unusual for him, that's all.
Suuuuuuuuuuuure, Kyon, suuuuuuuuuuure. ♥ ~

I actually loved seeing Yuki in action, haha. (And her showing, uhm, a little emotion even. LE GASP.)

Well done! My creative juices are flowing again already, oh my~ (Damn! +grumbles+)

[_yaddayadda]

Thanks! I'm so glad I finally found something for Yuki to do. I love her in action, too. I could rewatch the scene with her fighting Asukura over and over and over.

Well done! My creative juices are flowing again already, oh my~ (Damn! +grumbles+)
Mwahahahhahah, exactly as I planned....