[OriFic] Don't Know What Love Is (But You Do)

[a1y_puff]

Title: Don’t Know What Love Is (But You Do)
Rating: G
Word Count: 994
Day/Theme: 2/Love
Summary: “I don’t love you, but we can go out, if you wish.”
A/N: Barely surviving Day 2 of the Celeng 10 Hari Kreatif Bersama Tante-Tante Fujo. I am the last one to finish today. Wrote the last part with finite_farfalla and nherizu taunting me to lose, lose, lose. They’re so mean.

Comments

[nherizu]

Woaaaa hahaha... Reminded me of Shoujo manga indeed, but most of all, of Seven Days! One of my favorite tropes *swoons*
Ah, you made me want to pinch Flynn's cheek! And Jenna was the kind of girl I like in fiction, I loved how she could accept everything without crying or whatever girls usually do, although she did sound sad and resigned when she talked. Nice story! Emang niat bikinnya wakakak.

[a1y_puff]

Hehehe I read Seven Days too, and yeah, admitedly, this is kind of inspired by that too, among other things XD

And thaaanks! Glad it looks niat :p (tapi emang niat sih, niat gak mau kalah hahahaha)

[nayru774]

And another interesting story. c: Who cares if it's shoujo manga-ish, it's fun to read. xD

Looking forward to the next one. c:

[a1y_puff]

Heheh well there are SOME enjoyable shoujomanga out there, yeah :D

Thanks again for reading, glad it entertained :)

Looking forward to have you read my future submissions too! I will write at least ONE Yullen during this challenge, I swear

[nayru774]

If you find a bit of time, give HoriMiya a try! It's one of the best shoujo mangas I've read in a long time. :D (Not that I read much of anything lately, but.)

:DDD

[dark_kana]

I like this one. How Jenna can take things without starting to cry. And how Flynn realises he still doesn't know love but he knows he wants to be with her. I'm actually glad you didn't make him suddenly blurt out that he was in love... ^^

[a1y_puff]

Heheh thanks! And yeah, I thought if he just said "I love you" at the end, it would ruin the background I have created for him, and it's kind of impossible to actually realize you're in love in just three months after previously believing he might never love, yeah? :D

[isumi_ilde]

Okay, first thing first, the ending was very abrupt, but let's blame that on the word count restriction BUT YOU REALIZE YOU CAN WORK ON THIS??? EXPAND IT, MAKE IT A SHORT STORY/NOVELETTE OR SOMETHING???

It's already had a great premise and a nice build-up, sayang aja kalo endingnya abrupt gitu. Konklusi emosionalnya kurang berasa, padahal build-upnya udah bagus ;A;

GOGOGO

[a1y_puff]

You know what.

I'm so turning this into a teenlih. Ha! #plak