[Fic - Kanda/Allen] Slow Step (1/?)

[a1y_puff]

Title: Slow Step (1/?)
Author: a1y-puff
Fandom: D. Gray-Man
Pairing: None yet. Eventual Kanda/Allen though.
Genre: Romance/Humor for now.
Word Count: 2258
Rating: PG-ish
Warning: None really, I think.
Summary: Kanda was used to claiming mutual hate with Allen, so when the bean calmly and matter-of-factly confessed he was in love with him, Kanda didn’t know

Comments

[bloodiedangle]

*swoons* this is awsome, and it's sad that you cut it off here!

It doesn't matter what you include in this fic, because it'll still be amazing.

Can't wait for more! :)

[a1y_puff]

Hee, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^
Sorry for ending it there, I didn't know what to write anymore XD;;

Hope to see you agian in the next chapter ^^

[harmony283]

What I want to see? Keeping them both IC XD *but then I can't really see that until the chapters are written so*

But so far YAY. Because out of the two Allen would be the most likely to confess, and take charge in that sense *nod* since no Kanda isn't emotionally dumb, but he doesn't know how to initiate things (most likely).

The ending scene was freakin' adorable, btw. *snickers* so cute~

Also like the story (since again it sorta fits with...the only way I can see this pairing working *if it isn't just a hit-and-run kind of deal*)

chapter's also a bit on the short side *used to longer ones* but that's personal preference I suppose...

Keep it up~ ^^

[a1y_puff]

I'll try to keep them as IC as I can XD

Yeah, I agree, Allen is the one who's more likely to start anything, because.. well, Kanda is Kanda, what can I say? XD

Anyway thanks, glad you enjoyed it ^___^

sorry fior the length, I tried to make it longer but failed miserably. I decided to leave it like that rather than adding stupid things and dragging the story, so.. ^^;;

Thanks for the comment! :D

[harmony283]

okay *nod* I'll hold you to it XD *since you do a good job with them*

Yeahhh...I mean one person's reply to the whole making 'em fall in love thing was 'well Kanda needs to be a little OOC for it to happen' and it's like "Uh...why?" ^^; that just turns me off really bad XD Because i mean if they can't be paired together acting like themselves then what's the point?

Eh I usually end up having mine long unintentionally XD *usually aims for 10 pages* but if you run the risk of just putting silly things in--then don't. *shakes head* but don't try to restrict yourself either. Long chapters = love <3

You're very welcome~~ ^^ have some pocky? *in a good mood cuz her girlfriends coming tomorrow...err, today technically but whatever XD--for christmas~

[a1y_puff]

*is nervous* PRESSURE!!! XDD lol, I hope I won't disappoint you then ^^

Haha, I knooooow. The point is kinda lost when you make them so OOC they're barely recognizable. And it's not just Kanda, even Allen is often described being too soft or too girly... the pint of it being shonen-ai is because both parties are MALE who have manly/boyish qualities!! *argh, sorry for the rant, I can't find too many good fics these days >.>*

I usually intentionally writing long fics only when I'm writing for someone else, like a request or something. I don't know why. A friend of mine said I'm a pressure junkie XD
And yes, I'll try to NOT add stupid things. But when I'm inspired, I will probably write longer ^^. I personally love reading long chapters XDD

Yay pocky! Me wants!! *haven't had lunch and it's 2 pm here*

[osu_okita]

Its not good.

ITS AWESOME

eheheh.

[a1y_puff]

^_____________^

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :D

[a1y_puff]

Ooh, thanks so much for your comment! Don't worry, I love rambling comments, they made me happy ^^

Anyway, I'm glad that this fic could interest a non-Yullen fan :D (Oh, btw I love Lavi too. In fact, he might be my fave character, but I like him with Lenalee, for some reason XDD).

Thanks for your comment on the characterizations! It really made my day! I hope you would enjoy the next parts too! (as soon as I figure out what to write XDD)

Happy Holidays to you too ^__________^

p.s: I love your icon! Allen's so cool :D

[dark_kana]

And I forgot to say it in my review on FF.net : Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you as well!! ^^
Oh, and I got your ecard! *glomps*

Anyway, just to say I really really love this fic!! (and I urgently need to continue reading the manga ... *fails*)
Please, continue soon ... ? XD

[a1y_puff]

Hee, thanks and you're welcome~ *hugs*

Also, thanks for your review on ffnet! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic :D

GO CATCH UP WITH THE MANGA! XD XD