[Fic - Kanda/Allen] Slow Step (1/?)

[a1y_puff]

Title: Slow Step (1/?)
Author: a1y-puff
Fandom: D. Gray-Man
Pairing: None yet. Eventual Kanda/Allen though.
Genre: Romance/Humor for now.
Word Count: 2258
Rating: PG-ish
Warning: None really, I think.
Summary: Kanda was used to claiming mutual hate with Allen, so when the bean calmly and matter-of-factly confessed he was in love with him, Kanda didn’t know

Comments

[isumi_ilde]

Do I still have to ramble now even though I've been somewhat hysterical on the phone? XP

[a1y_puff]

Mwahahaha XD
Thanks! I blame how I wrote Kanda entirely on chap 189. Really, Kanda's a BIG DORK I swear XD

About the blanket. You see, I needed Kanda to realize that Allen DO love him, coz I aimed for that "Well, shit" in the end. I thought at first to make the 14th attack him but then it'd be too soon. Thus, the cliché cabin fic with the sharing blanket XD
Oh btw I dun plan it to go smooth after this so worry not :p

It seems like a lot of people like the last line. Kanda WIN xD

Thx 4 d summary. I think I might tweak it a bit when I can think again XD

[bakafia_kawaii]

I FINALLY MOVED MY ASS TO READ THIS, HELL YEAH *SHOT*

*coughs* Ignore that. Now let's talk about the fic.

I love the way you wrote it through Kanda's POV. Oh Kanda, you always make everything looks interesting and disastrous. ♥

Moving to the specific lines I like (I think I have several of them~):

“You love everyone,” Kanda stated with a frown. “You love those stupid Akuma, the goddamn Noah, and God knows, you probably even love the fucking Earl,” he added for good measure.
- Dear Kanda, you win at life. lol xDDDDD
Because it's so true and I can't help but cracked up when Kanda also included the Earl. lolAllen didn't even bother to deny it. xDDDDDDDDDDDD

So instead, he asked, “What’s the difference?”

“...Kanda, have you gone through puberty?” Allen’s tone sounded half-amused and half-exasperated.
- And the payback is so sweeeeeeet~ Nice one Allen. xD
lolpuberty, what puberty? This is Kanda we are talking about. For all I know he might has frigid hormones. xP

Contrary to popular beliefs, Yuu Kanda was not that socially

[a1y_puff]

OOH YOU REVIEWED! 8D *shot*

-About Allen loving everyone including the Earl; I kinda think that's totally possible. He's messed up in the head, after all, who knows? XD

-About Kanda and puberty... Well, I thought it'd be funny to have Allen asking it to Kanda instead of the usual the other way around XD

-About Kanda not being a big social retard, no, I'm not sure in canon, but I'm taking an artistic liberty in characterization for this fic 8D *bricked*

-Now the ending, ever since the beginning, when I just started writing this, I'd been wanting to end it with 'well, shit' coz I thought it'd be amusing. So there you have it XD

I'm still trying to decide what to write for d next chap. I got so many good feedbacks it made me nervous as hell coz I dun wanna disappoint you all, so... Wait for a bit? ^^;

[bakafia_kawaii]

SURPRISE, SURPRISE 8D

- Very true, Allen is just to messed up. xD

- INDEED, it gets boring to see people making Kanda teases Allen for it. I have seen it a lot in other fics.

- LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL, I see. xDDDDDDDDDD

- "Well, shit" isn't really that original way to end a chapter, but you pulled it nicely here. :D

Sure, I don't mind waiting~

[sleeping_sei]

A new awersome fic! ^_^ Allen got a birthday se.. hm, gift :)

[a1y_puff]

Hehe, yeah, Allen got his gift ;D

Thanks for reading, glad you like it ^^

[king_autumn13]

If I could purr I would. That was quite nice. And they're in character too so bonus!! Lolz I like. It's really cute. Wait you know, I don't like it I LOVE IT!!!!