[Fic - Kanda/Allen] Slow Steps (2/?) -- REWRITTEN

[a1y_puff]

Title: Slow Steps (2/?)
Chapter title: I Don't Bite, You Know
Author: a1y-puff
Fandom: D.Gray-Man
Pairing: Eventual Kanda/Allen
Genre: Romance/Humor/Angst
Word Count: 5649
Rating: PG-ish
Warning: None really, I think.
Summary: He wanted to believe that this was just some sort of a sick joke that the stupid rabbit made the bean do or something, and if

Comments

[sleeping_sei]

I think the chapter is good and I like it more that the previos version >_>
(more 14/Kanda action is nice XD)
And the fight - you gone into details, hm...

[a1y_puff]

Thanks~ i'm glad you liked this better :D

[isumi_ilde]

Iwiiiiw... I still did a crappy job, I think. Good thing may-san's there and did a great job, hohohoho~

It's much better than the previous version, though. Much more engaging, and I know how much time you spent to rewrote this~ *huggles*

I've practically rambled about it anyway, you know what I have to say. X3

[a1y_puff]

What's 'Iwiiiiw'? XD

Thaaanks~ aww, you were doing good helping me fixing things <3

[nayru774]

I think you re-wrote this chapter wonderfully~ Really, it's simply awesome now. :'D

Everything developes smoothly and reasonably now and it just fits. I like how you changed the fact that Link stayed by the two the whole time (even though we Yullen fans prefer it when Allen and Kanda have some alone time); it was more interesting that way.

How you described the battles was also great. I wouldn't have done it better (not that I can actually write battle scenes). :'D

Road and Tyki appearing instead of the Earl was a high five. It seemed more reasonable, and way more fun (at least for me). <3

Allen's struggle with the 14th was also well portrayed and justified. And the suspense at the end was very much there this time, so a ton of cookies for you!

Can't wait to read the next chapter~ x3

[a1y_puff]

Hee, thanks so much! I'm really glad you approved of this chapter ^^

The battle scene had to be rewritten a couple of times, so I'm glad you liked it ^^
About Link, yeah I do think he can be interesting by being there during the conversation XD;

But Kanda and Allen will have a bit of alone time next chapter. :D

Thanks much for reading! *accepts cookies*

[nayru774]

Yay for alone time for Kanda and Allen! :'D

*impatitntly waits for the next chapter*

[starchoir]

Please continue *insert more coins*

*-*

[a1y_puff]

Thanks, I'll definitely continue this. Please be patient, ne? :)

[starchoir]

:( Where's the next chapter?

[a1y_puff]

RL is eating me alive at the moment, sorry. I lost my muse. I'm trying to get it back though :)