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a_boleyn1230

Fic: His Own Secret

Sep 14, 2009 08:54

My very first fic for the show MerlinI've been working on this for over a week now, despite swearing off shipping and fic writing not so long ago. ;) Writing for a new fandom is scary, and I don't feel that I quite have the full grasp of the characters yet. So, this is just an expository piece with Arthur exploring his own feelings. I might do a ( Read more... )

fic, arthur/morgana, merlin

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a_boleyn1230 September 15 2009, 16:24:08 UTC

Thank you Aud, you are sweet for reading even if it's not your ship. I think you'd really like them. ;) I think this one will get my heart broken again, so I try to limit myself but it's like a drug. And I'm the ultimate crack addict, lol!

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a_boleyn1230 September 17 2009, 02:51:00 UTC

I know, it sounds like this next season they will be working towards Arthur/Gwen, which makes me unhappy. I have to rely on my imagination.
If they release this on DVD in the US, you'll have to grab it. I think you'd like it! ;)

caddyeverafter7 September 15 2009, 04:12:27 UTC

Ooh, great work! It was well worded and well played out, and I loved it ^^ Great job love ♥

a_boleyn1230 September 15 2009, 16:25:15 UTC

Thank you so much! I really believe this is something like what goes on in Arthur's head, lol. He loves her.

littleday September 15 2009, 22:26:21 UTC

ommggggg sooooooooooooo fucking lovely :) i love arthur here ty!

a_boleyn1230 September 16 2009, 02:15:15 UTC

Thanks so much. :) I love the person Arthur morphs into when Morgana is involved!

canon_balls March 20 2010, 03:35:01 UTC

I know I read this before, but for some reason didn't comment -- bad me. N EE way....

LOVED this line
One gaze into those eyes, and he was powerless to deny her anything. If she asked him to wear a gown and dance in the courtyard, it scared him that he might actually do it.

So true. Write this now ;D

Seriously, you do such a great job at getting in their heads and sharing their inner-most thoughts, and this fic is no exception. Great job!

Poor Merlin, having to wash those dirty sheets every day...LMAO!

a_boleyn1230 March 23 2010, 02:55:34 UTC

LOL, Merlin might want to make nice to the laundresses!

I am touched that you are taking all this time to read my fics. :) Together we hurl donkey poo at canon!
Trying to get characterization right is important to me, so I appreciate your comments. <3