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pizzazzical April 8 2010, 23:21:54 UTC
Oh my God! My heart, it breaks! T_T

I love how you always manage to delve into both their minds so clearly. I was so engrossed in this that I wanted to scream at Uther when Morgana was. There is no way in hell Gorlois would have let Morgana get married off to an old man without her consent! And yet, I guess that was the harsh reality of life in those times. Damn you, Arthur, for not speaking up! T_T

Oh and I almost forgot to tell you how excited I was when I saw this on my flist! I thought that it wouldn't get posted for ages! This is wonderful and as you can see I didn't waste any time reading it, even though it's past midnight for me. I always have time to read your A/Mor stories :) Please post more soon! *puppy dog eyes*

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a_boleyn1230 April 9 2010, 02:49:59 UTC
HI BB! *tackles*
Thank you so much for reading! And for staying up late to do so. <3 I confess, I was hoping to hear from you because I so value your feedback. I want this story to be vivid and active and real, so you being "engrossed" makes me happy. :D There will be some interesting twists ahead.

I thought that it wouldn't get posted for ages!

Ha, I know! I finally decided to just do it, because I've been nitpicking endlessly, over the silliest things, for a week now.
Thank you again!

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a_boleyn1230 April 10 2010, 02:30:58 UTC
Thank you very much! There are some twists ahead but please keep reading, I promise it will be worth the wait. ;)

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dutchess_sandra April 9 2010, 09:41:01 UTC
You made me so curious about this one that I just had to read it.

I'm glad you finally decided to start posting chapters because the start is definitely promising. I like the idea and how you started the story with Arthur and Morgana already in a relationship.

The details (like with the chamber pot -funny-) are great and I'm looking forward to the next part. Arthur has been remarkably quiet thus far and I cannot wait to see what his reaction to Uther's decision is.

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a_boleyn1230 April 10 2010, 02:33:06 UTC
Hey! Thanks for reading this, Sandra. :) I've put a lot into this fic and I value feedback from my friends.

The details (like with the chamber pot -funny-) are great

Thank you! I love the Arthur/Merlin banter on the show and want to include that here as well. I think the correct term for that time period is "close stool", but I think more people are familiar with the term chamber pot. :D

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i_luv_booth April 9 2010, 15:33:21 UTC
this was awesome, the banter between Arthur and Morgana, and Arthur and Merlin, was spot on. I cant wait to read more, and I'm hoping for a happy ending :) x

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a_boleyn1230 April 10 2010, 02:35:11 UTC
Thank you! Trying to get the characterization right is important to me, so I am glad you picked up on the banter.
I promise the ending will be worth the wait. :)

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hynotic_n_crazy April 10 2010, 00:03:11 UTC
OMG arthur better go after her, why didn't he defend her andf why is uther being so mean.... omg i'm going to cry... more please? More now? More now! *bounces like a hyperactive five year old* MORE!!!!!!!! *puppy eyes* please?
omg i might die without more of this story... you don't want me to die do you?
it's so perfect i NEED more!

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a_boleyn1230 April 10 2010, 02:36:49 UTC
Liza, is that you?!? :D Thank you so much for reading this.
No you can't die on me, you need to live to experience the ArMor goodness I've got lined up here! I'll be posting chapter 2 tomorrow (Saturday my time). <3

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hynotic_n_crazy April 11 2010, 00:43:51 UTC
lol i forgot i didn't say it was me, yes it's Liza! and yay for more, i'm assuming it'll be tomorrow for me since today is saturday!
love you bo!

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